Hi! My name is Audrey, I am 13 years old and I live in California. I like to play sports, especially water polo. I sing in a choir and enjoy acting. I love reading and writing. At the moment, I’m reading Bullet Point by Peter Abrahams (and so far, it’s quite captivating), and I’m writing a novel titled The Good Girl’s Guide to Jewel Theft. But that will change, because, starting November 1st, I will be participating in NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month).
For my inaugural column, I chose to interview some of my friends about the aspects of YA lit they especially like.
Caroline C. (14 years old):
- People who are funny and cool (Caroline defines cool as “people who are smart, funny, and maybe a little out there.”)
- Good-looking people (Caroline really hates when the good-looking main character is in love with a “freak of the week”, and she wants at least one beautiful person in a novel, preferably more.)
- Mysteries, theft, and murders
- Sports
- Inside jokes that are funny!
- Characters like Ty from Behind the Curtain by Peter Abrahams and Adam from The President’s Daughter by Ellen Emerson White—Caroline likes male characters who are “nice, smart, funny, confident, and beautiful.”
Eleri Q. (13):
- Beautiful people
- Fantasy worlds that you wish you could see
- Unique names
- Whole worlds made up of new, exciting entities and lives and laws and societies.
- Books that make you want to cry when they’re over—not necessarily because they’re insanely sad, just because you want to be in the world for a little bit longer.
- Mysteries where you have to think/predict what will happen, mysteries that aren’t obvious.
- British accents (Audrey and Caroline agree with this times 20)
- People who are intelligent/smart, and tall, because “I seem to connect with them.”
- Eleri feels really connected to the character if the character in question is super smart but then makes a stupid mistake
- Characters with a really ironic sense of humor, characters who get the humor in bad situations
- Characters who are just a teensy bit wicked!
Kailey S. (13):
- The one character who no one likes because they’re annoying or bratty or just misunderstood
- Characters who speak their minds, characters who are opinionated

- Kailey doesn’t like talking animals because they’re annoying and lame
- Ty from Behind the Curtain by Peter Abrahams
Alex W. (15):
- Alex likes The Hobbit (J.R. Tolkien) because there are funny characters and it’s interesting. It’s interesting because it’s fantasy but you can relate to the characters and understand why they made their decisions. He also likes this book because it’s not crazy out-there fantasy.
- He especially likes the Dragon from The Hobbit because he was tricky and smart, but also had flaws. Alex doesn’t like characters that are too perfect.
- Alex likes the Life of Pi by Yann Martel because it was kind of funny and also an adventure. Alex likes adventure stories a lot.
- Alex likes characters who are smart and funny and witty.
Audrey (Me!) (13):
- Interesting explanations of non-interesting things (I swear, The Red Blazer Girls by Michael Beils taught me how to do algebra. Now if someone does a good example on how to factor equations, I will be Set For Life.)
Characters who occasionally talk in other languages (Por ejemplo, I sometimes parle francais, y tu?)
Characters who do relatable things (believe it or not, sometimes teenagers actually have to stay home and study on Saturday nights and miss the party of the year. Pity.)
Books about art theft or jewel theft or the mafia or spies or criminals in general—except for psychopath teenage killers/druggies, they’re boring and way too depressing for me to care about.
Characters who betray other characters
- Characters like Ty (seriously, everyone loves Ty from Behind the Curtain. It’s indisputable.)
- Inside jokes! Seriously, if you’re writing for teens, and you don’t include an entertaining inside joke, I’ll be like “no.”
- In plots: at the risk of sounding cliché, the bigger the better. I like plots with some drama, some intrigue, and a bit of action.
- In characters: I happen to like characters who are unique, who aren’t perfect. I like the character named Allison who lives next door—but secretly, Allison has an alias that supposedly lives in Prague.
To close this, I would like to state what (in my opinion) is over in YA. Vampires—I hope you know that vampires are finally dead. Ditto vampire boarding school. Seriously, how many books must be written about anti-social vampires at boarding school?
Also, the name Damien/Damon/Damion/etc. for the bad-boy love interest irks me. If I read this line ever again—But when she arrives at the Academy, danger is waiting for her, in the form the darkly passionate Damien.—I think I shall die.
I’ve noticed a trend in YA lately—semi-dystopian heroic fiction. I’ve seen a lot of main characters with special powers, be it the power to fly, or the power to morph into a wolf. My opinion is this: it’s not overdone yet, but it looks like it’s heading in that direction.
Finally, I have a request. Write a normal love interest for us. Someone who isn’t all mysterious and dark and brooding. Someone who doesn’t have eyes that convey hidden depths or battle scars that form weird tattoos. Someone who doesn’t display exceedingly stalkerish traits and isn’t illogically overprotective. Someone who isn’t named Damien.
Audrey is a Contributing Editor to Write4Kids and Children’s Book Insider: The Newsletter for Children’s Writers. She’ll be writing on middle grade and young adult literature topics about once a month. If you have questions for Audrey or topics you’d like her to cover, send an email to Laura@write4kids.com.





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Thanks for this article. Very interesting!
Thanks for the run down! I’m in the middle of book #3 of my ghost series and I’m definitely going to keep these points in mind!
Beautifully said. Thanks.
I tweeted about 2 good NaNoWriMo writer’s tools, if you’re thinking of blogging about that next month:
http://twitter.com/AmyMacDonaldFTW
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“If I read this line ever again—But when she arrives at the Academy, danger is waiting for her, in the form the darkly passionate Damien.—I think I shall die.”
That cracked me up.
This article was really helpful and actually validation for the characters that are already in my soon to be finished book!
Rats. So my new project about a vampire named Damien who goes to boarding school and stalks a lame, notsosmart, humorless girl named Jane, who’s so unattractive, her face could stop a clock, will maybe not work?
LOL!
I loved this post – thanks, Audrey, for the insight. Also, you’re very good at this writing thing. Enjoy NaNoWriMo – good luck!!
Audrey, this is a great article! All of your tips were so helpful to me in creating my plot for the next book I’m writing (I’m doing NaNoWriMO too!) I’ve just got to say that I totally agree with everything Eleri Q. said. We must be like twins or something! Thanks for for the tips, and I hope to see more great articles in the future!
Interesting stuff, Audrey; hearing from the people we write for is pure gold. As for beautiful guys? Got to love ‘em.
And I’ll tell you: there’s not a single person who’s perfect in any of my books (perfection is WAY overrated and downright dull)–and no one’s named Damien.
Oh, and thanks for the tip about BULLET POINT. I became an Abrahams fan after REALITY CHECK, and BP’s been on my to-read pile way too long.
Audrey, great article. I am not doing NaNo this year, because I’m all ready involved in a novel that I am writing. But I love NaNo. Good luck and I hope you get your word count and more.
Anyway, this was so very helpful (and parts of it had me giggling) that I am going to blog about it tomorrow.
I loved hearing everyone’s thoughts! Thanks!
Good luck with your novel!
I could read Audrey all day… well done on the article and I shall keep your points in mind while I await your next article.
I am awaiting with baited breath – it could be garlic to keep those pesky vampires away.
Great post! Snorting with laughter about the “Damien” thing.
Audrey,
Very interesting interviews giving YA author’s a peek into the YA reading audience.
Good comments on “what the YA does not” want to read.
You are at ease with words. Great article.
I’ll keep these in mind. I have a vampire love story with a British guy. Anyone want to publish it?
I love hearing what TEENS actually think about YA lit. As an *unpublished* writer, I’m so caught up in the writing game I’m not ready to look that far ahead yet.
Audrey – Read Kiersten White’s PARANORMALCY if you haven’t already. It has paranormal creatures and a secret government agency but the way it’s handled is wonderful – it’s so NORMAL. Very refreshing. I recommend it to everyone burnt out on YA paranormal.
Great post! I love that mysteries and suspense are both prominent genres in this list. And I haven’t read BEHIND THE CURTAIN yet – will be adding it to my list.
Wow Audrey. That was great. Thank you so much both for your insight and your most excellent writing. I am delighted to hear you are doing Nano. So am I. (for the fourth time) I am going to the Los Angeles kick off party tomorrow. my name on nano is sueberger3. I have NO idea what I am going to be writing. I look forward to more of your work.
Audrey and her friends provide some valuable information for writers of YA books! Thanks Children’s Book Insiders and Audrey for sharing this!
Wonderful post! Thank you for sharing. I am so impressed with your Op Ed writing abilities! Looking forward to more Audrey!
Thanks, Audrey! Great insights from the audience…and your fun, funny writing style is great to read. Good luck with nano!
love this blog. I’m not a published author but write for teens. The book I’m writing now I kill off the main characters twin in chapter two and then I kill off her sister a year later……..friends think it’s too harsh for teens, i don’t at all. Like isn’t always fair or has happy endings.
love this blog. I’m not a published author but write for teens. The book I’m writing now I kill off the main characters twin in chapter two and then I kill off her sister a year later……..friends think it’s too harsh for teens, i don’t at all. Life isn’t always fair or has happy endings.
Love your viewpoint, Audrey! You have a real way with words. I’m looking forward to what you have to say next!
Audrey are you really only 13? So articulate and funny and already with a great writing style. Thanks for these tips. I write for adults but am also starting a YA – always good to hear what you lot really like. Best of luck with NaNoWriMo.
Hi, Audrey,
This is a great column! My new YA novel STACY'S SONG is being published in paperback and is already out from L&L as an e-book. So I've been checking off your lists and hoping my novel will be one that teenage girls will enjoy.
I do not understand what it is NaNoWriMo ??
And who is Damien, what is novel about it really exist or just an example?
And I think, all disagreement is written, that's all there in the Harry Potter novels. Do you mean a novel that uses magic, warfare, strange fairies, likely will not be too successful again after the appearance of Harry Potter?
Please, answer me. (Love your post!)
Thank you for all the nice comments and well-wishes for NaNo!
Answers:
NaNoWriMo– National Novel Writing Month (this month, November)
Damien/etc. is a fictional character who actually exists (? sorry, that made no sense). He's in many books. I wish he wasn't. His darkness and broodiness wrecks what could be decent books (of course, if they weren't about vampire boarding school). He lacks a personality, because emo-ness is not personality– it's a mental condition.
He is tempting, though. But resist. Please resist.
I like Harry Potter. I think Ms. Rowling is an amazing author.
But we are not J.K. Rowling.
I don't think that the Harry Potter style of book is going to massively popular again anytime soon. The recent YA trend reflects a new way of thinking. Teens are not that interested in reading about characters learning what to do. They're interested in reading about the characters actually doing it, not just learning about it. (Harry Potter 7 not included here).
But I don't think that Harry Potter should be caricaturized as a novel about warfare, because it's really much more than that. Actually, I believe the only true “warfare” in Harry Potter was a couple of chapters near the end of Deathly Hallows.
You can actually learn a lot from Harry Potter. The characters are flawed. The characters are fleshed out beautifully. The relationships between the characters and the dynamic is pretty darn flawless.
Did Harry Potter have strange fairies? I don’t exactly recall…
I don’t think fairies are going to crazy-trendy any time soon. At least, not a book written entirely about fairies. But I don’t exactly like urban fantasy (I like epic fantasy much better, but I’d rather read a mystery or whatever) so I can’t really help you there.
If you have any questions *points down* comment, or send an email to Laura.
Audrey
THANK YOU. What wonderful, fun insights here for children's writers! Kudos to Laura Backes for her visionary idea of giving one talented teen a regular blog "column"… and to Audrey, whom I had the pleasure of meeting at my August, 2010 intergenerational workshop for writers of MG/YA novels. (Laura was on our faculty.)
Audrey, then still 12, wowed me with her sophisticated reading, writing, and thinking processes. She's a stellar example of what can be accomplished with self-motivation and supportive adults — and a reminder to NEVER dummy-down for your target-age readers. Oh, and watch the cliches. I almost died (of laughter) reading about Audrey's aversion to dangerous, dark Damien!
Audrey, you are just brilliant. This post was so clever and funny. We have the link here posted on our community forum for the Vermont College of Fine Arts MFA in Writing for Children and Young Adults program… so have no doubt, you are definitely being heard! Thanks for sharing your 'insider' point of view.
Audrey, you are amazing. Keep your honest opinions coming! And keep working on your novels. Please.
Audrey, I enjoyed reading your blog. Informative and funny. However, I take umbrage at the necessity of "good looking guys." As a former ugly teen, I want the not so handsome guy a chance.
I like the article and I enjoyed reading all the ideas and comments. I think writing from the heart and what you know will previal in a good career.
Great article! I've been interviewing my nieces and nephews to try to get this same info but they're a little less forthcoming or articulate. Can't wait to read your future ideas and I'll see you in Nanowrimo.
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