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Straight Talk About
Talking Animals
by Laura Backes, Children's Book
Insider
Twenty years ago "talking animal stories" were everywhere. Then, in the
early 1990's, many editors decided they didn't want to see these books
anymore. Of course, established authors like William Steig never stopped
populating their stories with chatty mice or frogs, but beginning writers
had trouble getting talking animal books past the slush pile. Now the tide
has turned again, and it appears that every publisher has new picture
books featuring animals with something to say.
However, you can't just plop a cute bunny in your story and expect it
to sell. The number one rule in children's fiction writing will always be
to base your story on endearing, believable, unique characters. I've
studied talking animal books and found they fall into three basic
categories:
* Animals Who Act Human
Everyone is familiar with stories like Marc Brown's picture books about
Arthur the aardvark, or Else Holmelund Minarik's Little Bear series of
easy readers. In these books the main character lives with his or her
family within a society of animals that mirrors human society. They go to
school, wear clothes, play with toys and have very human problems. The
main character is a child just like the reader, and has childlike
thoughts, feelings and concerns. The fact that they're animals makes them
visually endearing to young readers, but it's easy to forget that they're
not human.
Another kind of book are stories in which the characters are animals
who act human, but they're not really kids. They live alone without
parents. Though they're adults in the animal world, they're really kids at
heart with very childlike outlooks on life. Often these books center
around the friendship of two animals, such as the Frog and Toad easy
readers by Arnold Lobel, and the Toot & Puddle picture books by Holly
Hobbie. Part of the charm of these characters is that children can relate
to creatures who are supposedly grown up.
* Animals Who Act Mostly Human
Another category is books in which the animals act mostly human, but
retain a few elements of their true animal nature. This subtly reminds the
reader that though these animals may talk, ride bikes and visit the
playground, they're still animals. Often the characters are depicted in
illustrations without clothes. Children are drawn to these books because
they're about talking animals, an idea they find funny, delightful, and
know is something adults would never accept. Paulette Bourgeois' picture
books about Franklin the turtle is one example. Though Franklin functions
mainly as a kid, he sleeps in his shell and doesn't have teeth (and thus
feels cheated because he'll never be visited by the tooth fairy). Jonathan
London's series of very early readers shows Froggy hopping and flopping
around as he tries to get dressed, and being reminded by his mother that
he's supposed to sleep through the winter (because that's what frogs do).
In Mem Fox's Possum Magic, the possums live in trees in the Australian
bush and are wary of snakes, even though they dine on pumpkin scones and
vegemite sandwiches.
Once you start gravitating toward reality with your talking animals,
you open the door for older readers. The juxtaposition of fantasy and
reality can be a compelling mix if done skillfully. Brian Jacques'
Redwall, a young adult novel about an abbey of peaceful mice that is
attacked by an army of savage rats is a prime example.
* Animals Who Talk But Remain Animals
The third category are animals who happen to talk, but otherwise remain
true to their animal selves. Generally, if these characters interact with
humans they act as any real animal would--in other words, they don't carry
on conversations with people. Though the animals may (and should) face
problems that children can relate to, these problems arise and are solved
within the boundaries of the animal world. This scenario is perfect for
middle grade readers. In E.B. White's Charlotte's Web, when Wilbur the pig
learns his fate is to be sold to a butcher, it's Charlotte the spider's
intelligence that helps save his life. James Howe's hilarious Bunnicula is
the story of a dog and cat who go to great lengths to find out whether or
not the family's pet rabbit is really a vampire. In each case the authors
used real animals as their models, and then imagined what they might
actually say if they could talk. Such careful groundwork results in
characters who are believable and very real to the reader.
Of course, you'll always find variations on the above, but the most
successful books tend to fall within these guidelines. Like any "rules" of
writing, they are meant to provide a framework within which infinite
stories can be told. And like all rules, it's only after you've mastered
them can you begin to break them.
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